Though it's not easy to say goodbye
The time has come that we have to
This is not the time to cry
(I'll grieve later, alone)
My heart is breaking
But this is right
For me, and
For you
'Bye.
Really, Vocal? A month before my 5-year anniversary, and you've got me writing angsty heartbreak poems?
What if I win this challenge, and then have to explain myself to my Beloved?
About the Creator
Natasja Rose
I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).
I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.
I live in Sydney, Australia
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Comments (7)
Sad. but hahaha to the comment at the end. Nice work.
Very sad . I had to cry 😢
Well-wrought!
This is beautifully done, Natasja. It is difficult to convey deep emotion with such strict parameters, but you pulled it off perfectly!
So sad but beautifully said
This is lovely, Natasja. Well done.
Wonderfully done, great entry. Congrats on Top Story.