When a moment feels like forever
and goodbye an eternity
when a touch feels like a heartbeat
and time both ally and enemy
when I am caught amid obligation
and the reality I want made true
it scares me to think how to say
all that I want from you
but I can see it,
and I can feel it,
but I wonder, do you want to fall too?
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Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Omg! that hits so hard right now for how I'm feeling about a situation! 🩷 So good!