Falling Apart
My forty-eighth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena
This is my forty-eighth dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
It is an attempt at visual free-form poetry for someone who is falling apart, below is what I would like it to look like.
The music is "Straight To Hell" by The Clash
Note this is not how I am feeling at the moment though I have felt like this in the past.
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My
Life
Is
Falling
Apart
My
Mind
Splinters In
A Thousand Shards Of
Despair
I
Have
Lost Everything That
I
Loved
Every Friend
Spurns Me
As I Descend
Into
My Deserved
H E L L
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Wow! I loved the form of this! And your poem resonated with me. Loved this a lot!
Splendid and dark!!! Hearted!!!