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Leaves of flaming hues
Descending in a crisp breeze
Fall’s fading beauty
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This is a beautiful Haiku, Sharon. Nicely done my friend.
I love the backlit leaves, and when they twirl before kissing the ground.
Fabulous nature poem!!! Loved it!!!
I think nature allows favourites... I like the red ones the best. I like the "heat" element, so undoubtedly "Leaves of flaming hues" was the line I aligned with the most. Sure hope you enjoyed writing this!
So true, Fall Fading beauty
Congratulations on leaderboard placement! This is a beautiful haiku.
This is just chef's kiss gorgeous MC!! Congrats on fifth place in this week's leaderboard!!!
This is the perfect description of the falling leaves. 💖
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Fall is beautiful...just like your haiku!
Perfect 👌
I probably read this about three times now and I can't help but notice the careful wording and attention to detail. Every word had their place and joined the rhythm with ease. Best of luck on the challenge MC 🤗❤️
Another well-wrought haiku!
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Lovely haiku and image, as usual! :)
Lovely Haiku mother combs! 😃 🍃 🍁
Oh wow, that first line was sooo gorgeous! Loved your Haiku!
Uber-gorgeous! Go Mother! 🫶🏾🍂🧡
"Fall’s fading beauty" I love that 🧡
Lovely imagery
“Fall’s fading beauty”—this line makes it seem almost as though the leaves falling are a curtain call of sorts to the season, ushering in the end of autumn so that winter can take the stage. Nicely done!
So beautiful, both the haiku and image
-Fall's fading beauty- I felt that line. Nicely done!
Beautiful