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Eyeliner

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Me. Picture of me.

is this what

Eyeliner green dreams of?

I’d take the mirror

Flip it upside down, lick the lipstick,

Dip it in the stuff that made up your voice and drown in it,

Is that me? the painted visage of a white blank screen?

Scream, like the painting or the movie—

Green, eyeliner underneath my migraine

Dreams.

I want my face as invisible and as impressionistic :

“Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte”

To be shown in encased living death, to have a tall man catatonic, staring

Closer, inching closer

Breath like a tonic

Is that a kiss? —oh!, no touching the paintings sir! Move back! (Oops? Sorry!)

Whichever mechanism

Drives me to be

A human being,

I paint my lips,

I show my hips

I squat, I Drop my hair

In curls

And show you my eyes—-

What’s behind them, truth or disguise?

Eyeliner

Looks hot on guys and gals.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    So impressionistic, wearing our Sunday finest (back when we did such things), painting the face, wearing the mask, wondering whether it helps to reveal or to hide whoever is inside. Haunting, mesmerizing, once again causing us to pause, to linger, & to wonder.

  • So unique and original. Loved it!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fantastic!!! Left some love💕💖

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Fabulous piece. Well done.

  • 💖✨Wow, this piece is Brilliant!

  • When I read this I kept thinking of the title to the REM song Crushed Eyeliner. This was so good Melissa.

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