~Existence~
Life after death - For the challenge : Stream of consciousness
If you wish — we can sink into the sky
Forget rules and be infinite as galaxies
Or be an entire planet, sleeping through life.
Until time now, you wake up
A galaxy around you where voices quiet down
Echoes of wars ceasing their conflict
Souls unfurl
Like a cosmic petal—sublime and radiant
Drifting in the aether of what once was?
Or does it dissolve when your soul flees...
Time's river ceases to flow
Stars igniting in forgotten constellations—reflecting off the ocean's bliss
A silent oeuvre of the beyond
Over the realms of dreams
Planets of unknown beings.
I look at my hands—I'm still alive
In the free air of dimensions unseen
Eternal breeze and solace in the mystery
There is a quiet space between the hollow breaths,
An essence of my own wandering
A rhythm of restless wonder
Where the echoes of infinity softly whisper
And I listen—
Ever so closely, to the symphony of now~
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
~𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓮𝓹~
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Center Stage with Gina C.
*** I'm keen to republish the interviews I did for my series with Vocal creators. It's been a few years and I thought it might be nice to revisit these wonderful conversations. I'll be releasing them one at a time for a few weeks/months.
By Heather Hubler5 days ago in Interview
Comments (15)
you such an amazing writer
I love how the poem explores space with metaphors. It's such an awesome poem..
Wow, that was some mind-wander.
Nice
This was beautiful, Kodah. Society struggles to see the beautiful side of this topic.
What a belter of a first line - I knew I was going to love this one. Good luck in the challenge.
I read this twice I loved it so much. Eloquent writing especially, "Souls unfurl / Like a cosmic petal—sublime and radiant". Loved reading this!
So beautiful, Kodah. I love the elegance and sophistication of your poetry.
Excellent entry, Kodah!
‘Stellar’ performance, Kodah! I really enjoyed this!
Wow! This is vibrant, opening a window to eternity; well done!
This poem remind me of a good book that take you in captivity with its twisted storyline
Beautiful way to describe something that can be seen so scary. Great work!
i get this and its brilliant!
"Stars igniting in forgotten constellations—reflecting off the ocean's bliss" That line was my favouriteeeee! Also, I learned a new word from you, oeuvre! Loved your poem!