every day i wake up broken
some days i can get it together
but today……
it aint one of those
every day i wake up broken
shaking like a shitting dog
the miasma of my despair
like copper in a storm
every day i wake up broken
some days are worse than others
but today
smells shitty already
every day i wake up broken
but i have to soldier on
i'm not allowed to feel
or be real
every day i wake up broken
some days the cracks still show
but today
all autopilot smiling fakery
every day i wake up broken
yay….i get to do it all again
but today
has got cunt written all over it
every day i wake up broken
the storms in my head never clear
but today
the storm is on fire as well
everyday i wake up broken
estranged from the night before
every way is fucking broken
every day i'm fuckin broken
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (2)
Brilliant. Like copper in a storm. Brilliant.
Oh my, you felt so depressed brother! I hope it’s better now?