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Blueberry Red Bull, John Becker from my novel The Half Paper Moon

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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slurred, slurped, so cute your aroma, not wasted

Like a bloated blueberry, I feel your pain is artificial and it’s tasted

Empty space sloshes around my frozen brain, I am very tired of this feeling

Where did you go, I miss you—I’m blue for you and I’m reeling

But with you Edward— I feel something tremendous growing, a blueberry kiss that leaves a beautiful trace.(no empty space)

love poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    This poem evokes a sense of longing and desire through its vivid imagery and playful use of language.👌👌

  • Nice ✨🙏💙Now I want Blueberries 🫐

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