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Empty Places

Empty buildings. Empty families. Empty Country

By Tina D'AngeloPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Empty Places
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Gawkers searched overhead at the unfamiliar rumble of roaring jet engines

Gaping hellgate flames and black smoke billowed, paper drifted, figures fell

Crematorium dust flooded streets filling nostrils with death's acrid remains

Bitter forever reminders of horror, the taste of their ashes never departs

Nothing left. Empty space. Althought bright, you can never touch the light

Elegyheartbreaksad poetry

About the Creator

Tina D'Angelo

I am a 70-year-old grandmother, who began my writing career in 2022. Since then I have published 6 books, all available on Barnes and Noble or Amazon.

BARE HUNTER, SAVE ONE BULLET, G-IS FOR STRING, AND G-IS FOR STRING: OH, CANADA

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    😢💔

  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was such a horrific event....and one that will never leave the minds of those who lived through it. You've captured the somberness it created, the horror of so much devastation and loss that was endured, and lingering effect it left on us in one fell swoop.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    It's still shocking to think about and remember, after all this time 💓

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    Oof, this one hits hard. I was little when all this happened so I didn't understand but I do see how the ripples of this horrific event has shaped our future (present). Well done, hits right where it needs to. My thoughts and prayers to those who lost someone and to those that were lost.

  • Gosh, this was so heartwrenching and packed a hugeeeee punch! I loved it so much!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    A Twin Towers story poem that still makes one think What if and why really.

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Dear Tina; aka Fellow Senior ~ It ain't like the good old days..whew, can't we all get along..! btw; I just wrote a short 'Eyes' with you in mind: There is no doubt that in your former career, you've heard the expression 'Eyes up Here'..! Mz~Uz Senior, Jay

  • Testabout a year ago

    I can't wait to be touched by that light, and live with my family and all of you free from disaster. Loved it, and nice to meet you again.

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