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Eli Eli Lama Sabachtani

My God, My God, Why Have You Forsaken Me

By Michelle Renee KidwellPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Simon Berger on Unsplash

Matthew 27:45–46 NIV

From noon until three in the afternoon darkness came over all the land. [46] About three in the afternoon Jesus cried out in a loud voice, “Eli, Eli, lema sabachthani?” (which means “My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?”).

He came

To pay

A price

For our sins!

~~~

He came a king

The King of humanity

Broken for our

Sins

They placed a

Crown of thorns

Upon his head

Piercing until

He bled

Our Saviors blood

The cost for

Our sins.

~~~

Mocked and ridiculed

They did their best

To make a spectacle

Of him

But there was something

They did not see

His divine glory!

~~~

Carrying the weight

Of our sins

Upon that tree

He cried out

Eli, Eli Lema

Sabathani

Separated from

Glory in that moment

He felt the weight of

Of humanities

Broken and sinful

Hearts

Upon that

Cross!

He paid the

Price for our

Sins

Endured it all

For you

And me

But he rose

Again

Even death

Could not

Hold him.

Copyright Michelle R Kidwell

March.14.2025

Free Verse

About the Creator

Michelle Renee Kidwell

Abled does not mean enabled. Disabled does not mean less abled.” ― Khang Kijarro Nguyen

Fighting to end ableism, one, poem, story, article at a time. Will you join me?

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  • Test9 months ago

    wonderful written

  • Susan Payton10 months ago

    Wonderful spiritual poem, you nailed it again Michelle! Nicely Done!!!

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I won’t forsake you! Gazoogabloga and me are always here for you! Great work! Absolutely amazing! And gasp, Gazoogabloga! Fantastic!

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Beautiful ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️

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