Electro—Cute
Another Love in 50 Words Challenge Entry. Yep.
By Paul StewartPublished 11 months ago • Updated 11 months ago • 1 min read
love is like sticking your fingers, your wet fingers in the socket, letting it electrocute you
electro—
cute—
you are so
when your hair stands on end
and you have that middle-distance stare
nonchalant without a care
for the rhyme fans
I
Find that love
Electrifying and inscrutable
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Comments (14)
Whoaaaa, that was so clever, electro—cute! Loved your poem!
Electro cute. Too cute! This was so good!
Electro Cute. Sounds dangerous and fun. But seriously folks, don’t stick your fingers in outlets wet or otherwise, no matter how cool it makes your hair look. I think you didn’t just go outside the box on this one, Paul, but left your house and town as well. I’m guessing a lot of Vocalites are now desperately trying to come up with meet-cute love poems before the challenge closes, thank you very much. Where Paul leads, others are sure to follow!
A wonderfully vivid poem and image ✅.
Why, this is shocking how hair-raisingly easy it is to plug into this one, Paul!
I really like this one, Paul! A lot! Clever wordplay, some striking imagery, and deeply feeling all at once! Bravo!
Stunning!!!! I adored this one, I hope it places ✨
too cute
cleverly penned
I love this, Paul! So clever!
This is to me quite humorous especially in the description for only love can share. Good job.
💙 Electro-cute, that's just too cute
Beautiful work Paul!
This is great! "Electro-cute" is so creative and such an apt description of love too, the wild kind that is!