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ease from your sleep
child of my dreams
look up as I hold your chin, listen and
imagine a heaven so wondrous that your
perceptions of who you are now, who you were, who you will become,
someday will be as wondrous, as celebrated, yet the norm without
exception as the stars, moon and sun.
About the Creator
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER
Admin. Vocal Social Society
Find me: @andreapolla63.bsky.social
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Comments (7)
So stunningly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic so much!
Mother's love is palpable in this piece, ROCK. Soothing and wonderful. Change a single word and the poem would be diminished. Really well done and an exceptional entry to the challenge!
This is calming and surreal with whispers of comfort. ❤️❤️
oh, this is a beautiful piece. Well done.
delicate and beautifully woven!
Gorgeous!!! Beautifully written!!!💕❤️❤️
Stunning work!