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Sleepless Dreamer

By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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ease from your sleep

child of my dreams

look up as I hold your chin, listen and

imagine a heaven so wondrous that your

perceptions of who you are now, who you were, who you will become,

someday will be as wondrous, as celebrated, yet the norm without

exception as the stars, moon and sun.

Acrostic

About the Creator

ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)

~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER

Admin. Vocal Social Society

Find me: ‪@andreapolla63.bsky.social‬

FB: https://www.facebook.com/susanandreasimmonspolla

ST: https://rock63.substack.com/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    So stunningly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic so much!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Mother's love is palpable in this piece, ROCK. Soothing and wonderful. Change a single word and the poem would be diminished. Really well done and an exceptional entry to the challenge!

  • This is calming and surreal with whispers of comfort. ❤️❤️

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    oh, this is a beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    delicate and beautifully woven!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Gorgeous!!! Beautifully written!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Stunning work!

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