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Echoing Melodies

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By Rowan Finley Published about a year ago 1 min read
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Come rest your weary souls,

on beds of bountiful blessing.

Cease fire your rocketing minds,

and lap up the waters of rejuvenation.

Sometimes, life’s test is to see if you will choose sage rest.

Plant yourself in nurturing earth,

with feet free, in grounds of friendship and camaraderie.

Let us gather around campfire,

and read the Chronicles of Narnia books aloud.

Wrap a blanket around your shoulders,

sipping hot chocolate and good memories too.

Some nights you hope would last for eternity,

but the next morning, you agree,

to write about the sweet times and rhymes,

etched as echoing melodies.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    It's just amazing. Cool memories.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    NARNIA and reading tales - r ghost stories if it is dark!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    So sweet!! Wonderful work💕

  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    "Let us gather around campfire, and read the Chronicles of Narnia books aloud.", you flashed my childhood before my eyes.... Those days were good when we watched it together; all the siblings 🥺💖 This is such a heartfelt piece... Thank you ✨

  • Colleen Waltersabout a year ago

    Wonderful 😊 I’m ready for all of the above…

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    A beautiful calming poem.

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