Echoes of the Untamed
The silent strength of ancestral defiance

The frozen picture contracts and expands.
We tend to forget what lies behind shadows,
Our history is hushed, hidden in heartbeats,
Haunting our heritage,
held tight in our hands,
humbled by harmonies
{Hellenic-harped misconceptions collide}
The women before us were fierce and wild.
They wanted to protect us from quiet surrender,
From the slow erosion of our spirit,
still silenced.
Remember the cages built without bars?
But with words, expectations, and fear.
The women before us were spectacular storms,
Untamed, serene, leaving traces of fire in their wake.
They knew the way of the wild, foraging for food,
Guided by the moon, they fought for the light
Gave birth to gods on endless breathing in and out nights,
Thus relieving the circle of life and death.
{Mismatched ellipses of thought}
Our ancestors’ strength flows through our veins,
Our bones are full of stories calcified and camouflaged,
Intergenerational etches, visible in the lines of our hands.
We still run wild with their footsteps in ours,
But our wilderness is protected
with convoluted concrete stones,
We feverishly look for the cracks where freedom can grow
undistorted.
Look at us wearing flowy, fashionable dresses,
We’re hiding still, behind this consumerism,
Crevices filled with cheap goods,
covering attachment traumas,
Do you still feel the strength,
the ancient defiance in our veins?
The women before us continue to live in us,
Present and past get saturated to a meandering path,
Going back to our roots,
The spirits are now mere cheerleaders at the edge of our sight.
The living proof of their defiance now
dormant,
deluded,
disconnected,
dancing with echoes of forgotten resolve.
Where are we now?
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***I originally published this poem on Medium.***
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Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Comments (7)
Whoaaaa, this was extremely powerful! Loved it!
Keep up that power.
omg I love this "Our bones are full of stories calcified and camouflaged," So powerful! This poem, all of it, triggers some ancestral connections.
cages without bars - brilliant imagery!
Brilliantly written
Beautiful!
I thought this was very good!