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Echoes of the Unseen

Rest in peace auntie

By ZuechanPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Echoes of the Unseen
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Start writing...Title: Echoes of the Unseen
In the quiet of the house, where shadows grow deep,
Lies the silence of stories we no longer keep.
Walls once alive with laughter and song,
Now hold their breath, as if something's gone wrong.
The chairs at the table, once pulled and askew,
Sit in their stillness, their numbers too few.
Each place setting absent speaks louder than sound,
Echoes of love lost, no longer around.
Where are the voices that called through the halls,
The warmth of the hand that steadied my falls?
The eyes that would gleam when a story was spun,
Or the arms that held tight at the end of the fun?
Time is a thief with a masterful hand,
Stealing the moments we don't understand.
First, it's the days that seem endless and bright,
Then years fade away into the stillness of night.
Photographs linger in sepia tones,
Frozen in moments where love brightly shone.
But no frame or picture can ever replace
The touch, the scent, the feel of a face.
The arguments, small, over nothing at all,
Now echo as whispers in the empty hall.
The love that we shared, in gestures mundane,
Is now what I treasure, though it caused me no pain.
I search for their faces in the quiet of dreams,
In the murmur of rivers, the song of the streams.
I think I can hear them, a voice or a sigh,
Yet when I reach out, they dissolve like the sky.
Grief is a river that flows without end,
Carving new paths where the heart cannot mend.
It winds through the valleys of memory’s embrace,
A mirror reflecting each long-lost face.
But within the sorrow, a truth softly gleams,
A love that persists through life’s broken seams.
For though they are gone, they are never far,
Their light still shines like a guiding star.
In the way that I laugh, in the things that I do,
Their essence endures, their spirit shines through.
In recipes shared, in the books that I read,
In the kindness I give, in each thoughtful deed.
Family is not just the here and the now,
It’s the roots that we plant, the branches that bow.
It's the whispers of wisdom passed down through the years,
The strength that sustains us through laughter and tears.
So though I am lost in the ache of their loss,
I carry their love, though I bear its cost.
They are the wind that stirs through the trees,
The warmth in the sun, the salt in the seas.
In the quiet of the house, where shadows still play,
Their presence lingers, though they've gone away.
For love is eternal, unbroken by time,
A thread that connects us, transcendent, sublime.
And though I may wander through memories vast,
I find solace in knowing their love will last.
Lost in my family, yet found in their grace,
Forever they live in my heart’s sacred space.
This poem delves into the profound and personal loss of an aunt who wasn’t just a relative but a maternal figure—a cornerstone of love, guidance, and nurturing. It seeks to articulate the depth of grief felt when someone so pivotal is no longer physically present, leaving an irreplaceable void in the heart and home.
To lose someone like a second mother is to lose a part of yourself, a part that held you up in times of uncertainty, celebrated your triumphs as if they were her own, and loved you with a quiet fierceness that could never be doubted. This is not just the loss of an aunt—it is the loss of a protector, a confidante, and a mentor who knew your heart better than most.
Through the verses, the poem reflects on the daily reminders of her absence—the silence where her laughter once rang, the empty spaces where her presence used to fill the air. It touches on the ache of longing to hear her voice just one more time, to feel the warmth of her hug, and to share with her the little moments that made life special.
But the poem also acknowledges the enduring nature of her influence. Her wisdom lives on in your choices, her love echoes in your memories, and her strength flows through you, shaping the person you are today. She is present in the way you laugh, the kindness you extend to others, and the strength you find to face life’s challenges.
The imagery of the poem is both somber and uplifting—painting her as the wind that rustles the trees, the sunlight that warms your skin, and the stars that guide you in the dark. It reminds you that while she may be physically gone, her spirit is interwoven into the fabric of your life, forever a part of you.
This poem is more than a tribute; it’s a promise to carry her legacy forward, to honor her memory by living a life that reflects the love, courage, and grace she bestowed upon you. It’s a way to say goodbye, while also keeping her alive in the most sacred places of your heart.


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