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Echoes Between “I” and Time

A poetic descent into the silence between self and eternity.

By LUCCIAN LAYTHPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Echoes Between “I” and Time

Echoes Between “I” and Time

By Lucian Leith

I feel heavenly when I could be “I” ,

if in abstraction to realm and claim;

in the other hand, I raise the wine and say:

where is my mind?

Sing — a song by a bird who lost his chord,

a tiger on view, haunting me,

my eyes gazed like a veil,

a drop of water mixed with one of tears,

my toxic treat.

Which one could survive without him gain!!

as much as the creepers run on stream,

not of consciousness,

but instead, a loop with time,

dancing with places

as if they had never been .

Beneath those eyes

a potion of love,

whispered by the lips of a witch ,

that’s why I always look further,

beyond her lovely soul,

inside her mind,

as a symbol she could never reach,

ever and over time.

It’s my horrible way,

my faithful road,

still maximizing the infinite

by a piece of silver .

as they said, Judas once betrayed Jesus for silver,

and for me,

a silver is the cause of pain.

And if you ask me :

which way I choose my suffer and pain?

A needle or a pen?

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About the Creator

LUCCIAN LAYTH

L.LUCCIAN is a writer, poet and philosopher who delves into the unseen. He produces metaphysical contemplation that delineates the line between thinking and living. Inever write to tellsomethingaboutlife,but silences aremyway ofhearing it.

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  • Harper Lewis2 months ago

    Pen, please. Let ink flow instead of blood. I see you fighting. Keep writing through it, and get outside among some trees if you can. The Japanese have a word for it. 💞

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