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A Town Where Nothing is as it Seems

By Mother CombsPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
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In a town hidden by majestic mountains

Deep inside a mysterious valley

Is a burgh filled with flowing fountains

Where everyone wears clothes of challis

As they go about their daily chores

No one would suspect the secrets that lurk

Behind the city’s closed doors

Hidden behind years of murk

The street full of twins, but none of them kin

Another oddity for your eyes to behold

There are no schools or nursing homes within

Because the town has no young or old

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Daily, they go about their work

Tending to all their personal affairs

On the surface, everything moves like clockwork

Yet, there’s a dark, heavy current hanging in the air

Strangers notice the oddness of the town

As they hurriedly pass on through

No one living there sleeps lying down

While the hospital appears to have a skeleton crew

There’s a secret buried deep in this valley

That the townspeople have hidden for years

You won’t find the answer looking in some alley

And the truth just may bring you to tears

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A/N: 🌹

After some goofing off (mostly from me, when am I not...) and talking, Kelli and I have decided to collaborate on a poetry series together. I'll do the first part (above), and she’ll do the second part. We hope you enjoy this. If you do, we may produce more. 💜🤍🩷

Kelli's part:

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock10 months ago

    Intriguing!

  • Tiffany Gordon10 months ago

    Great job! Please keep it up! 💕

  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    Looking forward to reading the next part! The first art definitely holds your attention 😉

  • Pamela Williams10 months ago

    Captivating. It's a unique and beautiful read!

  • Karan w. 10 months ago

    This was beautifully written! It was enjoyable to read and had a mysterious vibe.

  • Oooo, that's a veryyyyy suspicious town and people. Scary and mysterious too. I loved it!

  • Caroline Craven10 months ago

    Sounds like a really creepy place. Be good to see where you and Kelli go with this.

  • Ann ☕️10 months ago

    Oh wow! This is so cool! A great read for today 🥰

  • That was cool. And it isn't easy being twins!!

  • Wow what a fun ride. This was a great read. Keep it up

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  • Lana V Lynx10 months ago

    This was fun, reminded me of the movie "In Time." I wanna know what the town's secret is.

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Excellent really lovely to read ♦️♦️♦️♦️

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