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Drowning

A Senryu

By Matthew J. FrommPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Drowning
Photo by Camille Minouflet on Unsplash

Who will warn us all

When the tide comes rolling in

With heads veiled in sand

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Matthew J. Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.

Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).

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  • Poppy about a year ago

    Such a wonderfully powerful metaphor!

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    You just have a beautiful mind, Matt! :)

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Nicely done. I thought this was also about climate change until I read your note. I think everyone will be glad when this election is over, - it has been vicious. I am subscribing to you.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Oh!! The metaphor within this is so genuine!! I love the idea that if we willingly burry our heads in the sand then no one will be able to warn us before we drown. Or if no one votes then we won't have the leader we need!

  • Testabout a year ago

    well written senryu, filled with honesty

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    I feel the anxiety growing daily, fueled by the media. And honestly, can't wait till it's all said and done.

  • Joe O’Connorabout a year ago

    Nice Matthew- it's punchy and accuses, but not too sharply.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡❤️⚡

  • Heather Zieffle about a year ago

    Very nicely done!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Some carefully crafted layers to this. Great senryu, Matthew!

  • Stephen A. Roddewigabout a year ago

    I'm going to be so sad if my weekly $25 donations are for nothing 😞

  • Addison Mabout a year ago

    I thought this was about climate change and then read the authors note. Context changed and I realized there are far scarier things occurring than Halloween soon.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Well put! I have such anxiety about this election. Like a constant undercurrent.

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