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What hides in the long silences?

By Alexander McEvoyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Photo by Cathal Mac an Bheatha on Unsplash

Something in the way you look at me

I could always dream that hiding there

Lingering in every glowing smile

Everything I wished for hid itself in wordless glances.

Not that I could ever dare to ask what you

Conceal behind

Every silent moment.

Acrostic

About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

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  • Mark Ryanabout a year ago

    For someone who claims to be as dense as you do; you seem to know a lot about love.

  • Olufemi Afolabiabout a year ago

    Nice poem....congrats

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    This poem reads like a touch that lingers

  • Joe O’Connorabout a year ago

    I like the way there’s depth behind what the speaker can see, but they’re not sure whether it’s what they hope for. “wordless glances.” indeed!

  • Testabout a year ago

    HEEEEEEYYYY!!! Look at you Mr. Honourable Mention!!! Proud of you!! 🎉

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This is such a wonderful acrostic poem - don't know how I missed it when it first posted. Just wanted to reach out and say 'congratulations' for winning Honorable Mention on this week's leaderboard for Most Discussed Stories.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Love this!!! ❤️❤️💕 Congratulations on the Leaderboard win!¡

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Why not? Half the pleasure of a secret is the sharing of it 😁

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love this. Very powerful. ❤️

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is lovely. What is lingering in that smile indeed. Well done.

  • Oh the power of eye contact, I'm a sucker for it! Lol. It's soooo hot!! I don't know if this was what you were going for but looks like Donna saw it my way too hehehehe. Loved your poem so much!

  • Testabout a year ago

    This might be the wine talking.... but this felt kind of sultry to me. Like that moment in a book/ movie/ life when two characters feel that charge and they finally see each other.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Nice poem, Alex.

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