Distracted by Juliet again...
Dancing Distractions Challenge Entryโค๏ธโ๐ฅ
Dancing dutiful with my love for her
Inseparable from my mind...
She wrapped up my desires, and
Traded them for her devotion.
Reality only settles a diminutive portion of,
Answers that were never spoken so, I
Carry the torture.
Trapped
Inside
Of
Nothing!
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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)3 years ago in Poets
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That worked just great, both in the "Juliet" series and the challenge. Well done, Lonzo! ๐
Wonderful work, as always, Lonzo! Your poems speak to the true romantic in me ๐คโค๏ธ
Beautiful work lil bro! ๐
How do you even do this? Telling an entire story in just few poetic lines? This is so beautiful!
As wonderful as usual! Loved it so much!
Beautiful poem
I have some grate lines in this poem ๐๐ฅฐ
"She wrapped up my desires, and Traded them for her devotion." Oh, I feel this--the story of my life told in but two lines, eleven words.
The way you use the words you use, creating such a feel and imagery. This one was extremely well done!
Very nice flow!
Love the flow of it. Such a heartfelt poem.
Trapped inside of nothing โฆ I can so relate. Your way with words is wonderful, Lonzo ๐๐
Clever and it perfectly flowed!!@ Loved it!!๐๐๐
Really like these Lonzo
Woah!!! That was good!
I really liked the rhythm of it. Pulled my heart strings.
Amazing!! โTrapped inside of nothing!โ This poem is so heartfelt and sad but sooo good!! Yessss ๐๐๐ผ