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Distant Drums

My poem reminds me of my Mams Favourite song

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Distant Drums

I heard the drums, they are nearing,

Or was it the sound of my heart,

Pounding a rhythm, fierce and clear,

A beat that will never depart.

The echo of war or the pulse of desire,

A clash of the world or my soul’s quiet fire,

The drums are approaching, but who can say,

If they’re calling for me or leading me astray?

So was it the drums getting nearer,

Or was it the end of our love,

In the silence that follows, I stand in fear,

The drums fade away, but I’m still here.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Anthony Dunn 12 months ago

    A very old song

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    I could hear the drums coming. Good job.

  • Marzi12 months ago

    You write very well ❤️‍🩹..I need to learn from you. Keep up the good work !

  • Hania12 months ago

    lovely

  • verse voyager12 months ago

    beautiful.

  • Lana V Lynx12 months ago

    Nice poem, Marie, made me think about what people feel when a relationship ends.

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    Good job on sharing what ending a relationship could mean.

  • Denise E Lindquist12 months ago

    Nice!! 😊💕💗

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