Disappeared Into A Thought
Caught Unsuspecting
she disappeared into a thought
a subject she was not expecting
before she could stop
she was caught, unsuspecting
with her world spinning in reverse
everything changed direction
the simple act of dropping her purse
set the whole thing in motion
there she was, a young mom
in the grocery store with her kids
or was she mowing the lawn
what had she done with that lid
for the pan on the stove
wait, she remembered again
that her kids were all grown
and she now lived down the lane
at that home for the special
where they had a shop for her hair
and helped when she forgot to recall
things like, when, what or where
or her name on occasion
or the ones who came calling
and with a little persuasion
she might get to go shopping
oh yeah, back to the list
that she'd dropped on the floor
as she yelled at her kids
don't make me tell you once more
now it's time for your dinner
Edith, don't make such a fuss
it's been so long since you've been here
you should recognize us
then she stares off to nowhere
the smile fades from her face
that's how it goes here, in healthcare
everyone feels out of place
Especially those here, like Edith
who's memory comes and goes
on days she won't know who she is
and her whole world goes cold
guess we'll wait till tomorrow
and see if grandma remembers
cause our time here is borrowed
and she lives her life in his letters
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (5)
This line stood out for: cause our time here is borrowed
I loved how the poem was structured with so much enjambment, it really makes one feel connected to the poem in a way reflective of the subject matter. It feels like struggling to remember. Beautifully made!
Nice one, Kelli. I remember when I went to see my father in his final days, his memory was so bad that he didn't recognise me.
Heartwrentching!!! Captured the disappearance in your family poem!!!❤️❤️💕
Heartfelt and touching, well done.