Diamond Among Dead Empires
When the Page Bleeds Back
some poetry makes you sit up and think
some poetry makes you sit down and sink
some just makes you
the ink spills and then and then and then
~
and then there is some that is garbled nonsense
garbled nonsense, dressed in barbed wire
with barbs around your lips, if you imagine
a mouth with barbs.
~
and a body, slovenly, but dressed in the finest
silks and oils from the eastern side of the known
world we know
silks coating the oil-soaked skin of the lady
we all know that lady
of Egyptian stock
of Arabian beauty
a mirage in a sandy dune where no watery oasis
can quench your thirst for something more than
the breasts of a lady, the oily breasts
the oily silken breasts of a lady of eastern origin
~
soft and pert, her skin is, not her breasts
they are covered and coated in the finest
to offer dignity for her beauty
her feminine charms
her hair is tied back and plaited
restrained and reframed as not taken but
tamed
a volatile and weaponised word
but not here
~
here she is the queen, the diamond
in the sand, among the shells and crust
the dead skin of the dead empires
she sits among
of old
of great
~
her movements are slight, deliberate
but not conceited.
world-weary but with abandon bestowed to only the greatest
of muses
I sought to grab
I sought to know
her, in her many guises
~
though of eastern origins
her roots
they spread
her seeds
they sprout
in lands of foreigners
to her and her kind
~
as I wrestle
with her majesty
while taking quill to parchment
soiling the blank
with her presence,
her magnificence
~
She commanded armies
and conquered us all
with cruelty,
sensuality
and subtle kindness
nourishing us all,
bringing forth progress
enlightenment,
at her staff,
her rod,
her sceptre
~
with each new
empire
they grow and crumble
she remains
eternal
~
her blood
her elixir
drains
spills
splashes
the parchment
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: While having a comments chat with the formidable John Cox, we were talking about the idea of an unofficial challenge for bad poetry writing, because it would mean we didn't have to praise one another in the comments section so much. While chatting, I wrote this. It's not, in my opinion, bad, and probably one of my favourite "pretentious" poems. Which is saying a lot, if you've read any of my most recent offerings. Anyway. There you go.
Here is a link to John.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (4)
If this is you trying to write bad poetry, then the rest of us are in trouble. 🤣 I saw from your conversation with Aspen Marie below that you were thinking of Cleopatra and/or Nefertiti, but I was definitely taking it less literally and just imagining a muse that happened to be Egyptian/Near Eastern in origin. It just had that eternal and inspiring vibe to it.
You should be teaching this art, my friend. You mastered writing poetry to a level, I don't even know what you're doing here and why you aren't a published famous poet yet who's on the list of the New York Times or something.
I hate how when you try to be bad it’s still good
Ah! I adore your poem! Is it about Hatshepsut perhaps? She is my favourite of all the Egyptian pharaohs for all of these reasons. “restrained and reframed as not taken but tamed” - marvellous! “ the dead skin of the dead empires” What a gorgeous macabre juxtaposition to the regal sensuality of your goddess.