Dew-Wop- Part Two: The Instrumental
Light Breaks Water Challenge- entry #2
A September meadow sings in notes of dew
Songs without lyrics
But Daystar knows every verse
Prayers soak first morning lawn
Hushed hymns harken
"Please release these tears, so we may rejoice"
Eminence responds short of psalms
Warmth meets mizzle
Drizzle dries-
Sniffles become snazzy; Sun shoulders snuff
Pre-Autumn gestures
When silence is golden, always enough
Rise to the occasion
Lowland rainbows take a bow
Prisms, medley in a meadow
Six-hued songlet needn't have runes
Bask and bake meet dewdrops
Voiceless influential
Collaborative nae vocalite tunes
Light breaking instrumental
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Author's note: this is the sister poem to part one, an acrostic, in the Light Breaks Water Challenge.
About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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Comments (4)
This was such a wonderful poem and I absolutely loved it! Also, there's a small typo to the word "instrumental" in your last line
Really like the image and I could see the words in the picture. Good job.
Yeah, a fabulous sequel to a fabulous poem! The song continues, and of course this is one just as captivating! Your poems are so always so good!! You might need to share some tips, Marilyn, haha.
Such beautiful lines, Marilyn! Some great alliteration too! A fine companion piece, indeed!