Unusual dark,
A dense, little forest runs,
In spite of the deer.
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Carrie
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Let's Don't Do This
"I just can't do this anymore..." "Do what?" What can't you do? Put gas in your own car? I swear to God you make me take care of everything, don't you? You know I'm on my way to work right now but that never stops you from bothering me, does it?"
By Shirley Belk6 days ago in Fiction
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such a great talent
love this short descriptive Haiku!! Keep them coming!
This haiku captures a beautiful and evocative scene in its conciseness, the coexistence of "unusual darkness" and "dense small forest" creates a feeling of mystery and conspiracy, when the forest "despite deer" still exists, the resilience of nature is emphasized, the haiku gives people the impression of the eternal spirit of nature and the delicate balance between light and shadow, it invites meditation and stimulates imagination. When we read this poem again, we were still very impressed and had many feelings and memories, when studying in Oxford and Cambridge, we often met squirrels, deer and even foxes in the woods of the century-old garden where we lived, we even greeted each other, these scenes are still repeated in our dreams, thank you very much again for sharing, and have a nice weekend! Nature's Persistence in the Forest Among shadows deep, Deer find solace in the woods, Nature's harmony.
In just a few short lines, you've managed to create a vivid and thought-provoking haiku. The juxtaposition of the unusual darkness and the presence of a dense little forest evokes a sense of intrigue and mystery. The phrase "in spite of the deer" adds an unexpected twist, leaving room for interpretation. It hints at a contrast between the peacefulness of nature and the eerie atmosphere of the forest.
LOVED IT
GOOD HAIKU
Loved the flow of this! Fantastic Haiku!
Beautiful Haiku!