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Deep Soul

The feelings inside

By Forest GreenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Deep Soul
Photo by Mitchell Hollander on Unsplash

This pain hurts more than a headache

Some days i can’t even meditate

I hear myself cough when i breathe

Sometimes that’s hard for me to believe

Coughing up blood when i vomit

Disgusted by the look of a severed part

I hear babies anywhere they play

Maybe because of thor mothers going away

Chest keeps hurting the medicine ain’t working

My own nightmare is just staring smirking

It’s screaming out “i’ll see you in hell”

Now i got it trapped in a cell

All hail to the king in a nutshell

Sickening to those curse by a bad spell

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This piece of work is kind of nerve wracking in my eyes so much is happening.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Intriging!!!❤️💕

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    I love how you went from describing the pain as like a headache and then connecting that to meditation, I think that’s just pure genius. ‘Nightmare staring and smirking’ oh my gosh. I wasn’t ready for this poem to be this strong. It went under my skin and it won’t come from under it.

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