Pulsing
Pulsing
pulsating
Rhythm
beat
breathing
heart
meet
harmony
feet
feet in the sand
toes digging in
in deeper
sinking in
into the ocean
swimming in
into the deep end
the deep sea
seeing more than the eye can see
seeing me
in the reflection
of the sea
knowing me
knowing me to be
of the sea
i am
the sea
deep and knowing
deep and flowing
flowing energy
energy of the free
energy that courses deep beneath the sand
pulsating like a heart
a heartbeat in the ocean
deep beneath the sea
so deep you can no longer see
not with your eyes
but with your feet
feet on the bottom of the ocean
the ocean floor
where darkness feels like a knock on the door
a knock that awakens more
more than the eyes can see
where the third eye opens and pulses
it pulsates
in the middle of your forehead
it wriggles free from the chrysalis
and now
now you can see
you can see in the deep dark bottom of the sea
the colors are vibrant
you thought there was not life and
you thought you couldn't survive and
i thought it too
but it's my third eye
it shows me more than the light can
it shows me more than my eyes can
it radiates with life and
it pulsates
it's pulsing
pulsing
pulsing
again.
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
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Dark Memoirs - Index There are at least two kinds of people in the world: those who write this half-arsed kind of intro to a story that looks to separate the rare and the norm, and those who realise it's an overused framing device and don't.
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Comments (5)
It is difficult for someone to enter a true flow of writing that is spontaneous, effortless, and natural, with rhythm, melody, and harmony. Here, you achieved it, and I feel different worlds touching me, merging into one, and taking me on unlimited journeys. I truly enjoyed it, and in the end, my cheeks and eyebrows were quivering. Bravo to you.
I love how the poem shifts from the physical deep to the spiritual deep. The third eye imagery is stunning.
Can I just say what an outstanding writing element here, I'm serious so soulful, I love your style, I love the words, deep and moving for me and very powerful. So much meaning, so much movement in this element of work. Out standing I find. A big Well done and thank you for sharing such a moving piece of art here.
This felt so powerful! Loved it so much!
A vivid, rhythmic dive into self-discovery. Beautifully immersive and poetic.