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Dear Narcissist

Part III

By Poppy Published 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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If I am the clay

You are the potter

And I am trying desperately

Not to mirror your mould

But toxicity reaps

Toxicity

Someone facing

A knife painted

In their blood is

Bound to pick up

A weapon of their own

You wait til I’m

At my lowest and

Then bury me

Beneath rock bottom

A drowning person always

Claws at the nearest swimmer

But how guilty should I feel

When that person is

Holding my head under?

You tell me

I made my bed

I deserve to lie in it

But you welded the chains

You clasped the restraints

Around my wrists

How can you say

I did this to myself

When you’re the one

Who threw away

The key?

My biggest fear isn’t you

It’s becoming like you

(But let’s be honest

I couldn’t even if

I tried)

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)2 years ago

    Great job

  • Wow. This one took me to my childhood 🥺 Powerful poetry 👏

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Wow. This is fantastic. Well done, as always.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awwsome!!! Fantastically written!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Whoaaaa, as always, these narcissist poems hit me hard because it's exactly how I felt before. I loved this so much!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I really appreciate how firmly you attribute responsibilities here, and I love the imagery you use to do it.

  • Test2 years ago

    I love this entire series! I wish all narcissists could read it and be triggered by it. ‘Cause deep down they know the truth about themselves. That’s why they’re good at hiding it initially. They know they’re rotten to the core.

  • I was recently accused of being a horrible narcissist by another creator on here. Oh please, don't let me be like this. Please! That continuous baiting, projecting what we're doing onto those to whom we are doing it. It boggles the mind, making me so dizzy I no longer know what is up or down, right or wrong.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Wow! I need to go back and read the others now!

  • RP2 years ago

    I hope you’re alright. Heartfelt poem!

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