Daunting Sober
🌝when The Moon Strikes Full!
It was in my Grasps
And I was holding on...
I tugged on a rope
That was heavy as a stone.
I wasn’t thinking right
Damn, How could I
Get it wrong?
Climbing up,
And still falling down...
I stood up and paced
My feet on the
Solid Ground...
Sensuous Feelings between the
Hours of the Night!
My translucent conductive layers
Of Personality was conversing with
Me...
I cringe when,
Something else
Was insight...
I propelled
Close
But it was
Just
A Ray
Of Light!
Weird Dreams, Full Moonshine, and the Melodies of the night!
Swallowed My Reality
In My Pillow.
Daunting Sober...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
“ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet
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Comments (5)
This purports the reader right into your dream. Great job!
Wonderful! It’s always the pillow that greets us back to the real world… loved it!
Beautiful!!
Beautiful piece.
Lovely work!