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Daphne

Laurel

By Harper LewisPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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If I had known what would happen

I wouldn’t have let you catch me.

I was enjoying the chase,

my hair rippling in the wind I created,

feet flying through the forest,

the various birds twittering

about, laughing at how slow

the chase was. I imagine

they weren’t

surprised

when I quit moving

completely, save the wind

fluttering

through my leaves.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Stephanie Hoogstad2 months ago

    Nice job on the descriptive elements of the poem. It really brings to life the feel of the freedom that the running must have brought Daphne, before she was caught, how playing the mouse in the game of cat-and-mouse must have made her feel. Nicely done.

  • Jamye Sharp4 months ago

    Like the perspective of the one pursued.

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