Dancing Pyramids
Created Love In The Ocean
By Carol Ann TownendPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Zoltan Tasi on Unsplash
Dancing pyramids in the sky,
Red, pink, orange, yellow, and green jewels,
Created love in the ocean.
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Your haiku really brings those colors to life Carol—I could feel them dancing and creating this vivid, almost magical scene. It’s beautifully unique! Did you submit this for Sky-ku? Asking because it seems they’re really specific about the 5-7-5 syllable format. Right now, it looks like this haiku might have a few extra syllables, so a tiny bit of reworking could bring it right in line with that. Sometimes it's just about finding one or two words to shift or trim to get that flow. It’s got such captivating energy already—just a small tweak, and it'll be ready to soar! 🕊️
I love this colorful poem 💗