Ice-Fall
Frozen waterfall
Holding its breath until spring
Thaws, and flows again
About the Creator
Bex Jordan
They/She. Writer. Gardener. Cat-Lover. Nerd. Always looking up at the sky or down at the ground.
Profile photo by Román Anaya.
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Comments (2)
Yup. Matsuo Bashō would be proud of this one.
Haiku's are hard to master also. LOL! You nailed it!