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As you curl
and tighten
your twisted rope
around my neck
and stare
with your twisted smile,
into my soon-dead eyes,
I hope it becomes clear to you
that upon autopsy,
my vengeance is airborne.
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For Poppy's Prompts #6
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (35)
I appreciate the clarity and thoughtfulness behind this perspective. It’s well-stated. https://cucellenergy.com
I missed this (so much to read on Vocal!) but OMG what an ending! My mouth fell open and OH came out of my mouth!!! Congrats on the Leaderboard placing!!
Congratulations for placing on the leader board.
Ahhhh this is a masterpiece!!! I can't even pick out a favourite line because they're all equally brilliant. It sounds like song lyrics and i wanna hear it performed. Congrats on such a well deserved top story!
Well-deserved top story Cathy! 🎉🎉🎉
This is gorgeous and sinister in equal measure, I love it
oh the horror, to say the least. Short and sweet is the story of revenge. Congrats
Deserve Top story!!!! Wow!!! Twisted dark poetry
Wowza. Provocative and compelling! Great work, Cathy. Congratulations on Top Story! 🥳
Vicious, dark and brilliant
Awesome work! Love this read. Keep up he good work. When you get a chance please check out my work let me know your thoughts.
I did not anticipate that level of darkness in my light morning reading 😂 lol. Well done on top story and this piece, Cathy 😊
lovely, in a cruel and twisted way. Congratulations
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Ooooo!! I love the darkness of this piece and the different perspective!! Great work here Cathy!!
Seriously I can't imagine how your cute little face hides all this crazy! Love your surprises Cathy! Congratulations 🎉
Crikey! Do not mess with the Holmes!!! Message understood! Congrats on TS. 😁
well deserving of TS. bravo
Dark and dire with deadly writing execution. A "WOW" of a top story!
A beautiful and concise piece of writing
This hits so chillingly and raw, truly this is how one feels when they are eviscerated inside & out
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Wow! What a poem! Congrats on the Top Story! This is an awesome piece of writing.
yup, yup, yup...I KNEW it!! Congrats
Congratulations 🎉