conversation with invisibility
He is close to me but still keeps an infinite distance

the invisible creature living within me
I know you're always there with me, unseen and unbeatable.
I know you are my only friend,
One who will never leave me.
You will depart eventually, but only after putting me into a deep, peaceful sleep.
You mock my existence,
You hold all of my secrets,
You know things about me that I can't even comprehend.
You're the only mystery I can never solve,
Maybe you find me amusing.
When I'm asleep, you watch over me.
You send me into a deep slumber and take me on an unseen journey,
Even on dark paths and scary nights, you're by my side.
Are you the one who talks to me, or do you only listen to my words?
I know only you know that "I am not who I am.
In the end, it all comes down to one question—
Do you want to be free from this prison? Is that the case?
Or is it still just my question?
I know nothing about you, yet I've written so much about you.
Only you know this, only you.
About the Creator
Karan w.
Writer || Poet || Author
Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
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Comments (12)
" I know only you know that I am not who I am. ", touched deep. The words for your soul are inspiring. All the questions and assumptions are taking the thoughts to another level 🙌 Thank you for pinning it, it's a great piece ✨
Beautiful and deep!!!❤️❤️💕
This cuts deep. Love it.
soo pure
Precise and eloquent.
Amazingly communicated and very well and precisely written!! Weldone!! Strong one!!
Well this is so relatable. It's definitely a fact! Moreover, this poem is one of my favorites now. It literally describes me.
so philosophical. I felt my brain twist itself into knots and try to untie itself. Great Great job!!!!
The self?
Wow, this was very nice.
Good job.
Deep!