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Common Sense

Monday mood, maybe?

By Silver DauxPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Common Sense
Photo by Osman Rana on Unsplash

Give me silence and give it to me like a drug.

Inject it into the shallow waters of my veins

Until something bursts, something bruises,

Leaves a bloody mark that proves it was here.

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It lived inside of my chest like a mother bear,

Asleep to the world but devastatingly hungry,

Starving despite chewing on sugared silence.

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Store memories in my veins like nightmares,

Press them into the backs of my eyelids until

All I see when I close my eyes is the ghostly

Afterimage of something that was spectacular.

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I want to remember the high and the crash,

The good as it wrapped its legs around the bad

And fucked the common sense right out its head.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Whoa!!! That last line was fricken awesome, for lack of a better term. It landed perfectly!

  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    A loud and rowdy poem on silence, loved it.

  • D. J. Reddall3 months ago

    Quite a potent, brutal closing line!

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