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Commission

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By Rowan Finley Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Photo taken by Nur Andi Ravsanjani Gusma on pexels.com

I’m going to make my country proud,

and my father too.

I’m gonna’ go to war,

and it’s no chore…

not at all, in fact!

This is what I was meant for.

My calling.

My commission.

My heart’s beating desire.

The traditional life wasn’t quite right,

but I know that this is!

This life gives me the structure,

and adventure that I’ve needed all along.

inspirationalStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Maryam Batoolabout a year ago

    Your patriotism? A beautiful way of giving an ode to the country! The determination in words felt like you're ready anytime 👏✨

  • Komalabout a year ago

    This one’s got such a bold and proud vibe! Feels like a heartfelt salute to following your calling and chasing purpose. Totally inspiring and full of drive—love it! ✨

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