Blurs, slurs and sad songs bring,
a ring to the air,
combating the calling chatter.
It matters most because we play with our souls,
attempting to hush the crowd.
It’s their loss,
as they miss the notes of lingering memories,
and wistful longing.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming4 days ago in BookClub
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I am definitely gritting my teeth on the quality, but I swear; the violin you played was so beautiful! I mean; piano, guitar, what else man? You're so talented 👏🙌 These notes definitely deserve attention.
You play it so beautifully, I'm always so amazed. I wonder why it came out blurry on here, but what an amazing job you did! Bravo 👏
Wow, buddy! You are not only a great writer but a Maestro at the violin! Soooo beautiful!! ☺️👍🤗
How incredibly talented you are, bro! ⭐✨ Your violin playing is absolutely beautiful! The tune was so lovely and sweet; I could almost hear people chatting in the background. They missed out on something special! But honestly, it was still amazing to hear you play. Keep it up! ✨🙌👏
So beeautiiifullll! ✨