COLOR ME
Content
Double rainbows
Dark-green trees
Band aide elbows
Golden keys
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Beaded sandals
Black swimsuit
Silver handles
Crimson jumpsuit
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Blue-white beach bag
Vertical breakwater
Small blue flag
Orange spotter
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Purple Beach Towel
Grey seagull
Pure Vowels
Spotted beagle
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Green grass
White sands
Turquoise glass
Held hands
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Yellow sun
Blue skies
Day's fun
No lies
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Sunscreen tans
White swans
Colorful plans
Bodies bronze
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Blue-green water
White sails
Weather hotter
Red fingernails
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Pink sunsets
Bright stars
Sure bets
Candy bars
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Day's end
Salt scent
My friend
Relaxed content
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Color me content and comfortable.
Writer's note: COLOR ME was written for the Get Comfortable Challenge and for Vocal Writing Prompt group, Cathy Holmes' word was colors.
Thank you for reading. Always appreciated.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
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Comments (34)
Great poem, Babs!
I love this color pallette! It made me want to go walk on the beach!
That was a very interesting read!
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Really felt the beach and salt air ❤️ Love it!
Awesome! ☺️
Awesome!!! ☺️
Go Babs! :D
I love this so much, well done Babs
Nothing like a virtual trip to the beach. Phrasing was spot on to me.
Great!! Congratulations🎉🎉🎉
Wonderfully descriptive, comforting poem. Congratulations on your Top Story! ❤️
I love it
Fantastic job! I love the rhythm and mood of this poem!
Fantastic poem, someone already said it, but ya fantastic imagery!
The imagery is fantastic!
I love this!
Oh I do love this one Babs.
Congratulations on your Top Story! 💖 Your poem brought me on a wonderful journey and lovely experience. I love how you combined the Challenge and Cathy's prompt for this poem. You're absolutely fantastic!
Congrats on the top story Babs. Good stuff.
Beautiful work! YAY on your TOP STORY!🎊🎉💃🏽✊🏾⭐
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Beautiful picture! 💕
Congratulations on your beautiful top story Babs!! Beautiful 🤩
So beautifully colourful