Coal Dust My Book
A book I wrote for you dad (A true Story)
Coal Dust My Book
In shadowed veins of the earth so deep,
Where silence whispers and shadows creep,
Men like my father worked their way,
Through coal-black tunnels, such grueling days.
George Hurst, a name etched bold in time,
A testament to a life of coal.and grime.
Beneath the weight of the earth he bore,
The strength of a heart that gave even more.
Yet tiredness inside , a heart torn in two,
To feed his family and pay his way
Deceptive smiles, said I am ok, yet dad was ill
The two sides of his health, he had to pay.
Through dust and clings, his spirit was strong,
He fought through days weary and long
A killer of darkness, coal dust kills
A coal-dust man was my dad. It took his life away
“Coal Dust” spoke of more than the mines,
It carried his memory, his courage, dark mines..
A father’s love, a miner’s song,
A tribute to where my roots belong.
So here’s to the man, the love, and the strife,
The two sides of him that shaped a life.
A loving hardworking husband and Dad
Working the coal left lungs really bad.
Through every word, his strength remains,
A shining light in coal’s dark veins.
My hero my Dad, my only best friend
A dedicated job, it killed you in the end.
Note Dad I miss you so much my heart aches
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About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (5)
Most heartfelt tribute to you dad, Well done,
What a great way to honor him and what he did. Good job.
Amazing, wards from the heart that tell the story of a struggling hero
Wonderful, heartfelt poem! Amazing
Dear Beloved friends From the depths of my heart, I extend my gratitude for the wonderful feedback and thoughtful comments you’ve shared on my poetry. Your words lift my spirit and inspire me to craft even more heartfelt verses. Let’s continue to weave our dreams and creativity together in this enchanting journey. I cherish each and every one of you! With all my love, Marie381Uk