
would have loved
to have necked some beers with you Chuck
i reckon we would have smashed a few
trouble with a capital T
even though you
think i'm a rhymer
one aspersion cast
i snap it back to you all wrist skill
and beer burst blast
i picked you as
a drunken, accident prone sex offender
but what are ya gonna do
i never chose this part of my life
i can't recall any conscious approval
or self consent
it's just how it came to be
me....
the most inept english student ever
but it would seem i was listening
fuck me ...
i'm a writer
if my phone were a brush
i'd be a painter
perhaps nothing good would have come
of our energies being to close
had our timeliness converged
had our presence merged
is there any of you out there at all
feeling probing aligning
just for a split second
blink
that tiny moment
i thought i could see
a bit of you in me
but now i know
it wasn't seen
but felt
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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A wonderful paean to your alter ego!