Chocolate Kiss 💋
I included my shyness and Got lost in my satisfaction...
Cake hanging off your brown lips...
I disseminated throughout the juncture...
Making existence and woolgathering,
All in one moment...
You leaned over,
And gave me,
A one-shoulder hug...
My ear against,
Your chest...
I received,
Your liveliness...
I suppressed,
A feeling
That was given
To me...
Better safe than sorry.
You have a promising
Allure...
You carry a Delightful
Smile...
You resemble conflagration
yet you feel,
Steep...
Witnessing my higher
Nature...
To haul me
Away from temptations...
Cake hanging off
Your Brown lips...
I leaned over
For a Chocolate
Kiss...
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very nice. Love that last line.
I thought this was beautiful.
Such tender intimacy. And what could be better than a chocolate kiss? Afterall, if it's not chocolate, what's the point?
This was fun, great imagery I your descriptive language! Well done, Lonzo!
The best poem I have read from you, Lonzo! Wonderful!
"Better safe than sorry." I resonate with this line. This is a very creative piece. I love it!
Awww, this was so cute!
Whoa! Chocolate and kissing - PHOAR! 😺👍✨😊
Sensual temptation, beautiful poem, Lonzo. Now I’m pretty sure I’m making brownies tomorrow. 🤣❤️
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Very romantic 🥰
Amazing poem! So sensual and romantic. And damn, I want cake now!
I love it. Very sweet.
Another great read, Lonzo!
You know Lonzo, it occurs to me that you must break a lot of hearts (or at least position yourself where this is possible) thanks to your way with the language! Your writing drips with epic romanticism that even an old thug like me can perceive. You never cease to knock it out of the ballpark my friend! ⚾💎💨🎆✨💓!
That must be the sweetest kiss, enjoyed. Now I want Chocolate cake . I am going get diabetes with all these sweet poems. 😉
Outstanding!!!💖💖💕