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Cassia's Cross

A Narrative Poem on Rebellion

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Cassia's Cross
Photo by Tim de Groot on Unsplash

Prologue

This is for Mikeydred’s November challenge and Poppy’s November prompt, Horizon.

Crossing boundaries and rebelling brings new chances, but does come at a cost. What’s the key?

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The horizon red, no one ventured

The great elders would always censure

A realm they warned held darkened lore

That once one crossed, would be no more

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Cassia’s proud, defiant gaze

Pulled to edge like moth to flame,

Wisened rules could not restrain

She wanted life, She wanted fame

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Her feet touched the line, glaring red

Where Earth kissed sky, her needs were met

“Return,” called Kave, her bosom friend

“Should you cross, you face the end.”

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But Cassia crossed, the smooth ground buckled

Reality twisted, notions tussled,

Chaos covered, shadows vast

Troubles came that were to last

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Shadows danced around with glee

Pranced about, they wouldn’t flee,

Their words filled with bold deceit

“New life” they crooned,”Don’t get cold feet,"

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One figure came, chuckling with glee,

“Welcome to pure anarchy.

Your world guarded, made you sure

But you crossed, its breath no more.”

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Cassia reeled, soul nearly chained,

She crossed back before it waned

To stretch beyond does bring one chance

But wisdom and balance line the dance

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Her heart unbound her soul unchained

She returned lest chaos reigned

She faced life with heart now wise

Sought new sights with tempered eyes.

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Poppy about a year ago

    I love the rhythm of this!

  • Quite a dance with danger etc… glad she made it back in time 😳.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    gorgeously-written! BRAVO!

  • You're getting to a great point. Sometimes systems are broken and should be rebelled against, but "how" you go about "rebelling" is perhaps "more" important. I love the visuals that you brought into this!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Beautiful style and story

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Sounds like Shakespeare (of whom I am barely familiar from eons ago in school). ❤️

  • Rasma Raistersabout a year ago

    Wonderful verse and loved the rhythm and rhyme here,

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Such a beautiful poem, Michelle.

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Beautifully told narrative. ♥️

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Wow this is beautiful and powerful. I love reading it.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Aww! Loved it! Michelle :)

  • Whoaaaa, so powerful! Loved your poem so much!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Smart girl...

  • This is a wonderful set of lines for my challenge

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    The process to healing

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