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The Tethered Kite

A Senryu on Conformity

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Tethered Kite
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Everyone has a desire to break the mould of conformity and go against the grain. It's always nice to live in a world where one has one's space;

We do have to bear in mind that we live with others and must do so in tandem. The solution? Win-win. Let's strike a balance with this senryu.

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Wind breaks the dark clouds

Kite wrestles against the string-

Half grounded, half in flight.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Lovely thought and so beautifully written, Michelle. I like being a bit of a rebel, but I also realize the importance of compromise and sometimes, conformity. Your senryu speaks volumes.

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Lovely

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Perfect for the sentiment! (L.C. comment agreement).

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Think you have one two many syllables in the last line 🧐 Beautiful nonetheless!

  • Oooo, this was so freaking deep! You nailed this!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    A great metaphor for a dual nature of relationships, Michelle: we want to be free and fly but as deeply social creatures we cannot be completely untethered from others.

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