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Capitulation

Waiting

By Cindy CalderPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Silently, my heart wept tears in the dismal aftermath as

I waited long days amidst cherry blossom strewn paths,

Lingering there ‘til twilight, my heart aching in despair,

Each breath I took evoking an unanswered prayer to

Nurture and perpetuate a forsaken, futile plea for repair.

Cherry blossoms are now withered with only scattered remains,

Ensuring capitulation to unrequited love’s most grievous pain.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Cindy Calder

From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

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  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! You wrote a wonderful series of poems on the theme of silence, each one, but this one was especially striking to me!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What a heartbreaking last line! And beautiful imagery!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    The imagery fits perfectly.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Why do cherry blossoms have the power of sadness?

  • Omgggg, unrequited love is truly devastating! Your poem was so poignantly beautiful!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    The imagery of the cherry blossom is apt - beauty dies and what is left? Another lovely acrostic, Cindy.

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    This acrostic is rich in pathos and reminiscent of countless haikus that construe the fall of cherry blossoms as symbolic of the fragile ephemerality of beauty, which you capitalize upon adroitly herein.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    A beautiful piece, Cindy. Unrequited love is painful indeed.

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