
Candle in Fog
A candle shivered in the fog,
Its light bent around hidden shapes,
I followed the thin trail,
Where the mist swallowed my shoes.
Something watched from the hollow,
Eyes like drowned silver coins,
Every step echoed someone else,
I wanted to run, but could not.
Shadows tangled with my hair,
The world grew small and strange,
I felt hands brush the air,
Cold, familiar, accusing.
A figure moved ahead,
Vanishable as smoke,
I reached for it,
And it vanished again.
The fog swallowed the street,
Even my shadow dissolved,
A faint laughter rolled past,
And the night leaned closer.
I stumbled into silence,
The candle flickered and died,
Its light vanished like memory,
Leaving only the fog to watch.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

Comments (3)
I have made a recommendation of your story in this week's Raise Your Voice here https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-12-04-2025%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Wow, very nice. Like a thriller and well written, also. ❤️
A perfect description of what Vocal have done to me. Excellent words