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By Caitlin CharltonPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
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I fed him many
Moons ago, but his body
No longer respond
~Caitlin Charlton~
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Comments (15)
Creepy! Leaves too much to the imagination!
I see the humor , it should be : Do you fear me now 😉
How can it be that someone in such few words can make such a huge impact? Excellent job as always, Caitlin!
This is get under your skin creepy! Well down! Good luck on the challenge!
Chilling and beautifully sparse. Such a haunting little piece.
Chilling haiku and image, Caitlin. The haiku is jarring.
Does that mean he's dead? Loved this so much!
This is haunting in its simplicity.
Wow, excellent dark poem. Its sweet of you to post one of my stories on here, thank you 😊 💞
Some great writers! I need to add these to my reading list!
Perfectly eerie. Well done.
I love a good last line whammy. Well done! thank you for the mention and sharing my poem here. Much appreciated!
Ohhh, THIS one, wow, I was surprised at how much this short poem got me. The title and subtitle make it even more intriguing, like, she hasn't given up on him despite the fact that his body is no longer responding,
Sometimes I think one may need fed love and companionship over food to be truly nourished. That is what I got from this haiku. Good job.
Fantastic haiku...and such a sweet shout-out to some great writers