I 'spose it could have been worse for you
It should have been far better too
You suffered buyer's remorse
You wanted to leave me
So, so many times
I begged 'don't go'
Still don't know
Why you
Stayed
About the Creator
John Cox
Twisted teller of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Aint got none of that.
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Compelling and original writing
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Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (16)
A contemplative masterpiece, showing two sides to a complex matter whilst adding tenderness and unexpected regret. Very well done, a double hats off to you John.
You really got the heartbreak to come across in this poem!
Clever take on the Nonet challenge✅
John, this is …. true. It is a real life relationship - some have all hearts and roses and other fight through thorns to find a comfortable bed of petals.
Sometimes the remorse is worse when letting something go I guess.
Ooof, this hits hard. There’s a deep sadness embed in these lines. The “buyer’s remorse” descriptor was a very well chosen frame
Wonderful nonet, John!! So many people stay in relationships because it's easier than leaving.
Beautiful take on the challenge!
Wow...a deeply feeling piece. This is a masterwork, John!
This is beautiful, John! One of my favourites so far! :)
Ah, John! Your nonet so perfectly sums up the existential question about how love works. There is no answer, as you write, but you make your reader think about it in a creative way--buyer's remorse, something we all can understand in this consumers' world. Your versatility is astounding, my friend!!
I don't know if she's gonna buy that, remorse or not. Well done!
Ha! That title! Love how it was interpreted through your poem. Cheers!!!
Sometimes it take a while to appreciate what we have, even if it's not perfect. Loved you poem, and the pic too. Well done.
I've experienced buyer's remorse soooo many times. Your poem was so poignant and relatable. I loved it!
I love the way you used 'buyer's remorse'. Wonderfully penned :) (also, did you draw the cover pic? so cool)