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By Caroline JanePublished 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - June 2024
But
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You do you, my darling

But..

Shhhhh. No buts. Just do you.

What if I am mean?

Asking that question tells me you are not.

Awareness and unkindness can coalesce.

Yes, but...

No buts, remember.

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About the Creator

Caroline Jane

CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.

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  • Kabir Khan2 years ago

    Congrats for the top story

  • Special2 years ago

    I'm proud of you 🀚

  • Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay

  • Sarah Wilcox2 years ago

    Wickedly delivered that last line! I love this exchange and look forward to reading more of your pieces!

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Inspiring! Well done Caroline!

  • Excellent words

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Congratulations on TS Very well done considering but valuable addition

  • There is a raw purity in this that captured me; congratulations on Top Story also.

  • Congratulations for your top story and for your wonderful lesson in self Incredible the endless places you have taken us, allowing our imagination and personal experiences to lead us

  • Hue Smile Travel2 years ago

    Thank you sharing...

  • I love this moment of reassurance and introspection. Congrats on top story! Well deserved!

  • T. Licht2 years ago

    Congrats on top story!

  • shanmuga priya2 years ago

    Congratulations πŸŽ‰

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Delightful!!! Loved it!!!πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ Congratulations on Top Story too!!!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Great free versing. Congratulations on top story.

  • Rachel Steinmetz2 years ago

    Nice Job!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    She's done it again. How the hell did I miss this? This is just stunning, Caroline. Masterful writing as ever. So concise, but full of wisdom and kindness. Congrats on another well-deserved Top Story. You're on fire. Have you ever thought of putting together a book of your best stuff?

  • Test2 years ago

    I love the simplicity and relatability of this Caroline! Great work!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Are you eavesdropping? My daughter asks me this! What if I'm mean?

  • Love this, keep up the good work.

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Simply wrought but deeply so.

  • Note to self: Before doing something mean, always ask yourself "What if I'm mean?" Then answer yourself with "To ask that question tells me you are not." and proceed with whatever mean stuff you planned on doing. Follow me for more lifehacks 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 Jokes aside, I loveeeeeed your take on the challenge!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Short but the impact is clear as day. Well done!

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