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But Damn, those hot pants

Rare car, Mercedes-Benz 300 SLR Uhlenhaut Coupé

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
But Damn, those hot pants
Photo by Zoran Zonde Stojanovski on Unsplash

greased up, the hottest day of the summer

I was thinking why was this longitudinally-mounted 3.0-litre engine kicking on me—-

When I saw you in those hot pants

And my engine light came on,

I saw your blue moon, I was hypnotized

Like how two of the Mercedes-Benz 300 SLR Uhlenhaut Coupé were ever produced

And one has a red interior and

Mine is blue

Like you, you look blue

Blue like that one day I sat alone at that high school party waiting for my date to show up, and somehow I always knew she wasn’t going to show up

And so she never did

And I saw that papier-mâché decorated to look like a snowflake on the punch table, blue snowflakes for the winter formal

And I tore it into pieces,

And now you’re here, looking as rare as my car is, and those old tore up snowflakes,

And like me too,

And damn

I can’t fire off too soon, or else I’ll keep getting this kick back,

But you’re wearing those blue hot pants like they are in season

under this hot blistering summer sun,

Subdued, I feel sprinkled in a sort of rare form of blue divination

As you wink at me

And the car starts roaring thunder.

love poemsperformance poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Well done!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Awesome!!! Loving it!!!

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    Damn. this was incredible! Loved it. Such sparse words, but such intricate and detailed storytelling. and I welcome all uses of the word "damn". Well done, Melissa!

  • Ella Valentine3 years ago

    You have a new fan! 💞

  • Lori Melton3 years ago

    Perfection

  • Absolutely great fun with so many implied analogies , love it sis

  • Wowwww, this was soooo hot! Loved the emotions going on here! 🔥🔥🔥

  • Allie Bickerton3 years ago

    I loved the prose and the ending line. 💕

  • Really great! This felt so real, loved the perspective and the details you painted!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Damn that was straight fire!!! I loved the way you wove all of those elements together, the girl, the guy, the car, the pants, the colors, awesome :)

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