You close in like darkness around candlelight.
You suck up my oxygen until you see me flicker.
Watch me sweat.
But you can't put me out... not yet.
If you tried to put something over me
I would consume it.
I'd make it burn and watch it spread
until I'm everything, everywhere,
against you.
Hasn't stopped you from trying to stomp me out.
Hasn't stopped you from trying to take my breath.
It isn't fair.
You use what I love,
what makes the blaze hottest and brightest to melt me down to just a wick.
I don't just give off light,
I burn and you watch me, wickedly,
from afar.
How can I make it stop?
Oh, but I stand, steady...
eyes closed, concentrating.
I have a job.
I live.
I give light.
Then you come and I stutter.
I take.
Take back memory.
Take back pain.
I re-live what's best left forgotten.
I breathe in what's long gone.
You keep me trapped,
this is your covering.
If you can keep me burning under this, take up the air with it,
I fold in on myself.
I flicker.
gasp
Quiet.
Shadows.
Wind.
Ember.
Slowly
I
grow
again.
I'm
light
again.
Flickering.
Ashamed.
I don't burn as confident
I don't burn as tall
I don't burn much at all
Afraid of the darkness
(that can't consume)
Afraid of the shadows
(that I don't have)
Afraid of the bushel
(that won't win out)
Afraid of the liar
that put me out!?
You.
Illegitimate son. Disowned.
Cast down from heaven
Fallen like lightning
Born of the morning
Frightening.
Defeated singer.
I give you the finger.
You know you lost
But you dare
Come against
The adopted
Children
Of God.
I glare
Against you.
I smile.
I spread.
I capture
I take down
Imagination
Submit it
To God.
Watch me
Watch you
Flee.
Think twice next time
You
try
to
Burn
Me.
About the Creator
Mezmur
Rooted in Christian faith yet unafraid of human fragility, Mezmur writes as both survivor and worshipper. Her work invites readers to breathe again, to see that even in the deepest silence, Love remains.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme



Comments (11)
This is very deep, love every detail!
This definitely deserved Top Story... He brings us through the fire so we can go in and rescue others with powerful words. Well done! ❤️😊
Congrats on Top Story, Love the Story and you nailed it. Very proud of you…
Hi there, congrats on Top Story. Your poem weaves its way through countless to and fro thoughts and then culminates with the bottom line: "Think twice next time You try to Burn Me." I really liked it, even though I am hopeless at free-form poetry.
good . please take a look at my profile
wonderful writting and I enjoed your poets,good luck
Powerful poem. Also, congrats on top story!
Outstanding
Well written, congrats 👏
👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾💯 The way I shouted at the end!!!! Yasss!!! Congratulations on top story.
So awesome. I hope this gets TS.